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The Don't
31-10-2007, 02:55:PM
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Yes very bad quality, and singing isn't loud enough. Lyrics are probably temporary cos they sound like a five year old written 'em. It's the first song I've ever written, bear that in mind :(

Keegan
31-10-2007, 05:52:PM
You should re-record it so we can hear the lyrics better. Sounds promising, though - no bs. (Y)

The Don't
31-10-2007, 06:19:PM
Cheers, I've updated it so you can click the lyrics link underneath the player and read 'em. Hilariously contradictory, a case of writing them in five minutes and thinking of words that rhyme.

Zlatan
31-10-2007, 06:48:PM
Can't hear a f*ck of it. But the guitar sounds nice. :)

Shouldn't this be in the music forum BTW?

Tajike
31-10-2007, 09:10:PM
Can't hear a f*ck of it. But the guitar sounds nice. :)

Shouldn't this be in the music forum BTW?

QFT

MaSsiVe
31-10-2007, 09:27:PM
nice (Y)

$teauA
02-11-2007, 09:39:PM
That's a really cool mellow tune man. I like it (Y)

The Don't
03-11-2007, 09:12:PM
Thanks (Y) Rumour has it I'm up for the Ivor Novello award with this life changing track.

NiTrOsNiKeR1
03-11-2007, 10:55:PM
you can play the guitar well!

Maccabi-Netanya
08-11-2007, 03:03:AM
That's a really cool mellow tune man. I like it (Y)

yes he is good,and wat u say abaut klimi saban?
good defender?

Zlatan
08-11-2007, 05:56:PM
You know that sig of yours is a little bit too big.

BTW listening to the song again I think the main guitar string although happy and quirky, starts to get boring after a while. Maybe some more variation?