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::shinji:: 03-10-2001, 08:03:PM I'm in the process of getting into web and graphic design, here's some of the promo stuff I've been working on for myself. Let me know what you think....
I'd love to see some more of your guys stuff too :)
::shinji:: 03-10-2001, 08:04:PM Another one...........
::shinji:: 03-10-2001, 08:06:PM Last one......
The True 04-10-2001, 12:10:AM Kill4Porto, are you sure you made them?
cause the first 2
are looking excellent, very very professional,
(I know what I'm talking about)...
I liked the style. once again: excellent!
;) just kidding with the name...:D
Benfica
Benfica
Benfica:D :D :D
Kill4Benefica: I am glad to see you got into web & graphic design. I hope our little talk on ICQ was an inspiration. If ya ever need anymore help let me know.
So do i get a finders fee? KIDDING!!!!!
PS. (I lost all my ICQ contacts)
PhiLLer 04-10-2001, 12:27:AM Kill4, you told you couldn't do any grafic designs, liar!!!:D
great work! love the colours too
The True 04-10-2001, 03:16:AM how about this:
note: this is a cd cover which is at the stores, not something
I did for fun.
Jambo Den 04-10-2001, 03:54:AM some great stuff there but it's not as good as this hibs badge...j/k
PhiLLer 04-10-2001, 05:05:AM The True:
I love yer design too......btw since you are a grafix expert how do you make yer grafix.
Coz sometimes I wanna make certain things but can't find the right quality pictures or photos for it, how do you do it?
Thanx
The True 04-10-2001, 05:16:AM every pic you use got it's copyrights, so you need to buy it
or you'll buy a specific pic, or you can buy an image book
which certenly costs less and got far more pics
but those are general and known pics unlike a specific pic
that you buy from an image bank.
The True 04-10-2001, 05:18:AM all the designs that I've posted here are CD covers
and are in music stores, all of them are of a
new age/world music.
::shinji:: 04-10-2001, 07:37:AM Hey, thanks a lot guys for the positive feedback and your kind comments :D
The True, I actually have a bit of a visual arts background (Illustration & Landscape Design), so I know a little about colour and composition, etc. which helps, but I know there are many principals of graphic design which I'm not aware of, so please feel free to give me any tips..would greatly appreciate it :) Your stuff is amazing, btw, gets me inspired looking at great work like that.
SCTW, oh yeah, I haven't forgotten our discussion on ICQ, it was very encouraging and confidence boosting, thanks! About the finders fee, we'll see :D
PhiLLer, you gotta get some of your stuff up here! I'm always impressed by your graphics..
PhiLLer 04-10-2001, 07:59:AM OK ok if you insist, its nothing great though....
I just made this 'Dog Tag' ( the kinda tags that soldiers have around their neck).
It's my tag(made from scratch) for a game called Delta Force Landwarrior:)
I'll post summore later
http://www.philler.f2s.com/killertag1.gif
PhiLLer 04-10-2001, 08:01:AM The True:
Thos CD covers are just amazing, lovely colours etc.....excellent.
Could you maybe gimmer a couple of url's or names of Image data banks(or other places where you get yer pictures from)
Thanx!
The True 04-10-2001, 08:28:AM Philler, you don't get it from the web,
you buy it at store (image/clipart books) or in an image bank department (an ordered specific image).
the difference is that in an image book, every one who buy it buy the copyrights for the pics, and if you make a design for a big company you can't use an image that everybody knows, you need to buy an image that is exclusivly yours and nobody else is allowed to use.
Kill4Benfica, I know that when they teach design
you hear about hot colors, cold colors, matching etc.
my rule is that there are no rules...
it's depense a lot of what you're making,
if you make something related to trance,
you can either make it monogrphic and classic
or make it crazy and blend with 1,000s of colors
each one is a different style.
so as I've said: there are no rules.
Ubik Valis 04-10-2001, 10:34:AM That looks great! ;)
I like the way it looks more like a cd cover or something.....hehe
Vishal 04-10-2001, 01:02:PM All the fx is cool. Its professional and looks outta this world.
::shinji:: 04-10-2001, 01:51:PM Thanks guys :)
Dhruv 04-10-2001, 09:30:PM Man!
Those are really very cool and fantastic images from Killer and the True and Jambo....
Wonder where did you learn it from?
Can i get some tutorials coz' i don't even don't know how to write my name in 3-d text....
Thanks
::shinji:: 04-10-2001, 10:13:PM Me presonally, I just practice a lot and play around with the program checking out what everything does.
I'm actually new to Photoshop, I've only had the program for a couple weeks.....although, I have used Corel Draw for quite a while. I read tutorials online, and follow along step by step, this helps a lot I think.
Here's a URL for some good Photoshop tutorials.......
http://gurus.onlinedesignschool.com/
Check out the gallery at this site, it'll knock your socks off!
Dhruv 05-10-2001, 04:17:AM ya very helpful - the link
::shinji:: 05-10-2001, 06:39:AM This is a good link too, there's some good tutorials here on how to make some special effects with Photoshop.
http://www.handson.nu/
Dhruv 08-10-2001, 06:43:AM I wanted to attached an image....its a Fireworks 3 image...and its in .png format..Can anyone tell me how to convert it to .gif
::shinji:: 08-10-2001, 06:47:AM Can't you just open the image in Fireworks, then go to "file" and "save as", then just choose to save it as a GIF from the pull down menu? I think that would work.
::shinji:: 08-10-2001, 04:42:PM Check out my latest creation.........
Dhruv 08-10-2001, 08:42:PM Originally posted by Kill4Benfica
Can't you just open the image in Fireworks, then go to "file" and "save as", then just choose to save it as a GIF from the pull down menu? I think that would work.
I tried that but in the save as options only png formats come up....
::shinji:: 08-10-2001, 08:49:PM Hmmm....I'm not familiar with Fireworks at all so I'm just guessing here, but is there an "export" function under the "file" pull down menu? If there is, then try to export it, I know in Corel Photo-Paint you have to use "export file" to change the type. Maybe Fireworks is like that too.
Anyways, hope this helps, and good luck.
Dhruv 09-10-2001, 12:11:AM Ok i'll try that also....
The True 09-10-2001, 01:56:AM kill4benfica, what's with the B&W???
::shinji:: 09-10-2001, 06:11:AM I dunno, just trying to go for a different "look" I guess.
The True 09-10-2001, 06:46:AM hmmmm... drop this B&W thing...
what do you think about those:
(may I remind that all I show here is ALREADY in stores)
The True 09-10-2001, 06:49:AM and this one:
(there are few more later on...)
PhiLLer 09-10-2001, 10:43:AM I prefer the second one much more than the first you posted.
PhiLLer 09-10-2001, 11:47:AM Heres another one I made when I was bored.(sorry Kill4 its a bit of a copy from some of yer work:))
http://www.philler.f2s.com/digiart.jpg
btw: The True: Do you know how to create a face(3d) in photoshop or Illustrator or do you(or anyone for that matter) know where I can find a tutorial for that?
Thanx!
::shinji:: 09-10-2001, 01:46:PM copy? nah, not even close! :) There's always something about your work that fascinates me Phil, I think maybe it's the style you use. Anyways, I'm always impressed by the stuff you've shown me.
Keep up the good work. :D
PS: what are those symbols in the bottom left? They look pretty cool.
The True, your stuff looks great as usual...
The True 09-10-2001, 03:07:PM Philler, I think it's excellent!
and yeh... I can see the resemblace to Kill4 designs...
not that it's bad... it's very very good to keep your head open...
I've made about 1,500 proffesional designs
which are somewhere at stores... and I must say
that there were times that I was stucked in a style
and I even lost costumers because of it...
so keep your head open...
I wish I could learn some of this stuff.
(My email is joe@soccergaming.com and some of you have my ICQ)
HINT HINT :rolleyes:
The True 10-10-2001, 01:27:AM 1st.
Dhruv 10-10-2001, 07:55:AM GREAT BALLS..........
<<<<<<<<<O...O...O>>>>>>>>>>
The True 10-10-2001, 11:16:AM here's another:
The True 14-10-2001, 11:13:AM how do you like it?
The Crippler 14-10-2001, 11:45:AM Cool designs PhiLLer and Kill4Benfica!
The True 14-10-2001, 12:26:PM Originally posted by The Crippler
Cool designs PhiLLer and Kill4Benfica!
it's o.k..... just ignore from my designes...:rolleyes:
I guess they're not good enough for you...:)
PhiLLer 15-10-2001, 02:03:AM Lol, well I hate seeing people cry so here goes: Amazing Designs really really really really really..........really really love them.
Did that help?:D:D
The True 15-10-2001, 02:30:AM Originally posted by PhiLLer
Lol, well I hate seeing people cry so here goes: Amazing Designs really really really really really..........really really love them.
Did that help?:D:D
helps a bit :D give me more...:p
I was just kidding, if he ignore my designs
on purpose so good for him...
Mauricio 15-10-2001, 01:29:PM Cool work now could somebody help me doing a design for my web
::shinji:: 15-10-2001, 04:23:PM What type of design are you looking for?
::shinji:: 17-10-2001, 06:27:PM My latest, what do you think?
Dhruv 17-10-2001, 08:38:PM Is that a Big Mosquitoe in the green box...
The True 17-10-2001, 11:57:PM kill4benfica, allow me to say: "You Got "IT" dude"
great designs. I liked them.
PhiLLer 18-10-2001, 03:20:AM Looks very very very good Kill4!!!!!!
although whats up with the mozzy, is it yer pet(it always seems to be included in yer designs:D)
Here's one I made......ignore the text I was just bored:)
ShearerM4 18-10-2001, 03:25:AM very noce arts all round over here...
so what would be da best for this kind of stuff ..
Adobe 6 ?
PhiLLer 18-10-2001, 03:38:AM Yeh Photoshop6 most defenitely!! or if u wanna buy it in the shop and see Photoshop5.5 at a bargain price then get that(not much difference from 6 just not as good for web grafix)
::shinji:: 18-10-2001, 08:16:AM Originally posted by The True
kill4benfica, allow me to say: "You Got "IT" dude"
great designs. I liked them.
Thanks true, that's very confidence boosting coming from someone who knows the graphics industry :)
Hey Philler, I like your design a lot. I like the subtle colour combinations. Looks great.
About the fly? well, the black fly is the national bird of Canada, didn't you know? :D Seriously, I dunno why I use it, I guess I think they're kinda cool looking, especially up close. Almost looks like an alien or something?? :confused:
Dhruv 20-10-2001, 09:47:PM kill4 are you just joking or what?
Fly is national bird of Canada...(don't think its a bird)
[= SAM =] 20-10-2001, 10:42:PM All the graphics look awesome as i wish I could do them as well as you guys make them.
Also does anyone have any websites they have designed that they want to show off. :) :)
Just Post a link. :)
PhiLLer 21-10-2001, 04:19:AM Sure do Sam:)
coming soon
www.fifaireland.com
:)
::shinji:: 21-10-2001, 06:14:AM Originally posted by Dhruv
kill4 are you just joking or what?
Fly is national bird of Canada...(don't think its a bird)
:D no, I was just kidding about all that ;)
schmeichel01 28-10-2001, 01:02:PM http://soccered.thefirstnetwork.co.uk/images/s01.jpg
All your images make mine look like crap.
BTW I made that last year
The True 28-10-2001, 01:15:PM don't remember if this was posted
but anyway I think it's good
(BTW it selled already 10,000 copies so far)
::shinji:: 28-10-2001, 01:44:PM Yup True, I think we've seen that one, still looks great though :D
I like how you blend your photos, and the satin type background texture looks really nice too.
Steaua Buch Fan 28-10-2001, 02:19:PM Nice work Kill4 !
::shinji:: 28-10-2001, 02:21:PM Thanks pal ;)
Steaua Buch Fan 28-10-2001, 02:30:PM UR Welcome !
The True 28-10-2001, 03:35:PM kill4, thanx for the complimants...:D
Dhruv 28-10-2001, 08:28:PM Hi...man
I was away to New Delhi where i bought this cd...for 100 Rs...
(that would be less than 3 dollars... which has the following components...i need advice on what should i start with ....
ADOBE COLLECTION:
******************
ADOBE ACROBAT DISTILLER 4.0
ADOBE ACTIVE SHARE 1.4
ADOBE DIMENSION 3.0
ADOBE GOLIVE 5.0
ADOBE ILLUSTRATOR 9.0
ADOBE LIVE MOTION 1.078
ADOBE PREMIER 5.5
ADOBE PHOTOSHOP 6.0
ADOBE STREAMLINE 4.0
ADOBE TYPE MANEGER DELUXE 4.1
MACROMEDIA COLLECTION:
***********************
MACROMEDIA ANIMATOR DESIGNER 3.5
MACROMEDIA APPLET ACE 1.0
MACROMEDIA AUTHOWARE 5.1 UPGRADE
MACROMEDIA DIRECTOR 8.0
MACROMEDIA DREAMWEAVER 3.1
MACROMEDIA DREAMWEAVER ULTRADEV
MACROMEDIA DRUM BEAT 2000
MACROMEDIA EXTREME 3D 2.0
MACROMEDIA FIRE WORKS 3.0
MACROMEDIA FLASH 5.0
MACROMEDIA FLASH 32 1.28
MACROMEDIA FLASH IT 1.0
MACROMEDIA FREE HAND 9.02
MACROMEDIA GENERATOR 2.0
MACROMEDIA ICON DESIGNER 1.01
MACROMEDIA SCRIPT EDITOR 1.1
MACROMEDIA SHOCKWAVE 4.0 FOR DIRECTOR
MACROMEDIA SHOCKWAVE FOR AUTHOWARE
MACROMEDIA XRES 3.01
ULEAD COLLECTION:
******************
ULEAD COOL 3D 3.0
ULEAD GIF ANIMATOR 4.0
ULEAD JAVA RAZOR 1.0
ULEAD MEDIA STUDIO 6.0 PRO
ULEAD MORPH STUDIO 1.0
ULEAD PHOTO EXPLORER 7.0
ULEAD PHOTO IMPACT 6.0 RETAIL
ULEAD SCREEN CAPTURE 3.0
ULEAD SMART SAVER PRO 2.0
ULEAD PLUGINS:
**************
ULEAD ART TEXTURE 1.0
ULEAD TYPE PLUGINS 1.0
ULEAD WEB PLUGIN
its Really Confusing ....
The True 28-10-2001, 11:25:PM this is quite a collection...:D
a lot of the programs are flash and animation programs
and even video editing (adobe premier)
so my suggestion is to start from the basic...
which is not so easy too...
Adobe Photoshop 5.5
Ulead Cool 3D
and Macromedia Freehand, which probebly you won't have
a lot to do with it, cause it's more for standings and arrangeing
but those are the basic programs from each group.
The Crippler 29-10-2001, 01:45:AM ...........quite a collection:D
Dhruv 29-10-2001, 09:12:PM I recently visited Delhi (capital of India) where there's a computer market....and people who have no knowledge about the softwares,,are selling pirated cd's...when i asked him about the photoshop...he said he had it but he only charged me price for the cd....Thats what its like here in india...Now i'm planning to go to delhi to get cd of winxp and office xp...
As Regard this collection i have started with photoshop 6 ..along with that i bought a book ..."Sam's teach yourself Adobe Photoshop 5.5 in 24 hrs'.....
The True 29-10-2001, 11:02:PM damn!!!
I've lerned from "True's teach yourself Photoshop 5.5 in 48 hours"
you beated me in 24 hours!!!!:D :D :D
Dhruv 30-10-2001, 03:18:AM But it'll take me more than 24 hrs...to learn photoshop coz' i have other things to do as well...so you beat me!
KADER 22-04-2002, 04:03:PM wow! Shinji, did you really start about a year ago? I thought u were doing GFX for like 10 years! what can I say... I wish my first gfx were as good as yours...:(
::shinji:: 22-04-2002, 05:56:PM yeah, I'm relativly new to computer graphics I guess, I had always done traditional art like illustration, hehe even went to a 'poofy' art school for two years..... so it wasn't a really hard transition, just had to familiarize myself with the software...:) Art is art I guess, just depends on what you use to make it
;)
::shinji:: 22-04-2002, 05:59:PM aaahhhh! lol, I always hate looking at my old stuff! :D
ZePenguin 22-04-2002, 06:04:PM hmmm i remember that thread...great :mambo: :)
Larry 22-04-2002, 06:51:PM Your stuff is cool Shinji
Acid (X) Amino 22-04-2002, 09:57:PM Cool work........
Ubik Valis 23-04-2002, 12:29:PM Yeah shinji, your sh** is "tha sh**"!:mrpimp: :crazyboy: :D :cool: ;)
Julianinho 20-03-2003, 09:28:PM Originally posted by ::shinji::
aaahhhh! lol, I always hate looking at my old stuff! :D
::shinji:: you changed so much.:confused: :o :bob:
PhiLLer 20-03-2003, 10:01:PM Ah no, who decided to bring this thread back to life?! please...!:D
::..Federico Debla..:: 20-03-2003, 10:58:PM WOW! This thread was created one month before I got registered!
And I have to admit that I still love all the Shinji works.. old, new, everything!
Even though I didn't know this thread, but today when I saw it I couldn't quite understand why Shinji had the guest status! I though that he was banned or something, LOL...
Then when I read the latest post I realised that it was an old and great thread!
Shinji is a great art-creator, and undoubtedly one of my favourites!
Thanks man for all your work!
See ya!
-William- 21-03-2003, 04:09:AM Damn this thread is old! :crazyboy: But it has some great work :)
Deutschland 21-03-2003, 12:00:PM Jesus, this is so old.
Kill4Benfica :rolleyes:
DIE4BENFICA
flamehawk 21-03-2003, 07:34:PM Originally posted by ::shinji::
I'm in the process of getting into web and graphic design, here's some of the promo stuff I've been working on for myself. Let me know what you think....
I'd love to see some more of your guys stuff too :)
Holy, this thread so old. Haha, but funny looking at people use chinese characters, it translates to fortune and nature flat doesn't make much sense :crazyboy: but just gotta love Shinji's works.
Deutschland 22-03-2003, 08:01:AM Flamehawk, have some understanding!
Larry 22-03-2003, 10:13:AM "I'm in the process of getting into web and graphic design"
:p :confused: :rolleyes:
::shinji:: 22-03-2003, 03:33:PM you guys are nuts for diggin' up these old ass threads! :D Anyhow, thanks for the comments....even though I really do hate looking at old crap I've made :rolleyes:
It's probably going to be a while before I make anything new though, mainly because I just got a new job and will be working long hours. So not much time..
employment is severely over rated Shinji (N)
:| :D
::shinji:: 23-03-2003, 05:18:PM hehe, tell me about it.....but I need to eat, unfortunately :(
The Don't 24-03-2003, 12:02:AM really strange going through this thread.....lol shinji was just a baby in the world of comp.graphics at one time...?
Gives all of us hope!!
I have to say shinji the third pic you posted in this thread..it was only small...it was ****.
:D :D
wtf!: it was only 2 years ago!
::shinji:: 24-03-2003, 01:39:AM trust me, I've created A LOT of sh!t over the years! lol :D
Originally posted by ::shinji::
hehe, tell me about it.....but I need to eat, unfortunately :(
wrong, eating is over rated as well ...
:)
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