Thought I'd post this here in case anyone is interested.

The main character is a guy called GBH, he's a guy with permanent stubble who likes killing gangsters while mouthing obscenities :D

Six pages so far:

Page 1 (http://www.dobster.com/gbh/newgbh/newgbh1.jpg)

Page 2 (http://www.dobster.com/gbh/newgbh/newgbh2.jpg)

Page 3 (http://www.dobster.com/gbh/newgbh/newgbh3.jpg)

Page 4 (http://www.dobster.com/gbh/newgbh/newgbh4.jpg)

Page 5 (http://www.dobster.com/gbh/newgbh/newgbh5.jpg)

Page 6 (http://www.dobster.com/gbh/newgbh/newgbh6.jpg)


See what ya think - feedback welcome, good or bad.


Cheers

I saw them all, I like the drawings, especially the blood and gun shot wounds.


It didn't make sense to me this guy just goes around killing people, but it is cool, drawings are cool.(H)

whats with all the swearing, mostly its put in pointless places... and i doubt id be saying "oh man" with two bullet holes in my chest... otherwise i like the drawings... :)

its cool!

gj

Sin City?.......


The drawings look great, very good job. Like the ending. heh heh...:p

i dont think he would give him the knife if he only broke his nose...i mean 3 or so other guys are already dead...

Hehe, the random, harsh swearing is part of the humour. There is no real point to it. It's a bit british maybe, are any of you guys American? Maybe it doesn't translate so well.

It's not finished btw, the 6th page isn't the end.

yeah i figured that...

anyway its a tad like snatch eh? with the pikeys...:)

I've never seen Snatch :confused:

It's set in America so imagine them all with American voices.

Yeah it is a bit BrItish.:p :p :p

Sorry I had to.

well im not too sure about the humor part or the plot....... but the sketches are fantastic. The facial features, shadows, etc are excellent.

very good work.

great drawings, decent plot....Im not much of a comic man but that was pretty good

Thanks for the feedback guys.

It's only meant to be a dark comedy story, there's never much in the way of plot. It's just all about the character of GBH. I have older stories from a couple years back I may post another time.

here's page 7 of this story anyway, hot off the press:

Page 7 (http://www.dobster.com/gbh/newgbh/newgbh7.jpg)

Milo

lol it made me laugh, how things seem pretty calm at first then suddenly people are getting knifed in the neck and shot all over the place lol

Good job!

The story is pretty random, but the drawings are ******* brilliant. Great work. (Y)

Hehe, thanks alot. The plot isn't that important anyway, it's all just an excuse for comic violence really :D

Last two pages that conclude the story are done.

Page 7 (http://www.dobster.com/gbh/newgbh/newgbh7.jpg)

Page 8 (http://www.dobster.com/gbh/newgbh/newgbh8.jpg)

Enjoy :)

The ending, too, is random, but I like it. :mrpimp:

I didn't plan the story, just see where it takes me lol