*Story discussion thread*

[julioarca *cms*]

Reading a few stories I see that some have potential to be good. But just a few ideas, instead of writing, I quickly went onto my tactics and put attacking on, why not say, with 10 minutes left I told the boys to push up looking for the much needed goal, just makes alt nicer reading imo. Instead of writing how you are p-laying the game, write it like you are the manager of that club. Try it....

Also...

When people give up when they say, no ones replied, that means no ones reading, dont give up! It doesn't mean that they are not reading, replies aren't everything, views count for more....

 

[Tom]

Re: *Story discussion thread*

Originally posted by julioarca *cms*
Reading a few stories I see that some have potential to be good. But just a few ideas, instead of writing, I quickly went onto my tactics and put attacking on, why not say, with 10 minutes left I told the boys to push up looking for the much needed goal, just makes alt nicer reading imo. Instead of writing how you are p-laying the game, write it like you are the manager of that club. Try it....

Also...

When people give up when they say, no ones replied, that means no ones reading, dont give up! It doesn't mean that they are not reading, replies aren't everything, views count for more....

actually, you have a point there. Try saying it asthough you are the manager... good idea.

GOMEZ.