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_wolff_ 07/08 Kit Workings

wolff

Senior Squad
Hi,I'm a new kitmaker.
There are my last kits that I have made before.
I am making kits for near 1 month.
But I think I develope fast.
There are my some last kits
Manchester United 08 Home

Sivasspor (from Turkey League)Home 08

Fenerbahçe Home 08

Fenerbahçe Away 08
 

Lpayer

Reserve Team
emm...first to comment...(as usual...)

MU: it's the 150th time wee see this kit on this forum...and lots of designs strokes are missing (Nike design) as you did on the sleeves...btw, I don't think the logos on the sleeves aren't like this: there should be a kinda ball (back and white) logo on right sleeves...the MU logo on shorts has a too big width...you forgoto to invert the devil on right sock and you don't have to invert it on the left one...you forgot to invert the Nike logo on shorts...the collar is very realistic...too realistic, maybe ?? the logos at the left bottom is wrong, it must be NikeFIT


Sivas: the long sleeves design won't look good ingame, you forgot to invert the right sock (3rd sq.) and the left shorts (last sq.)...the strokes are very very weirdo...I might be wrong but the logo on shorts are too close of the...center (not to say "cojones"...xD)


Fener: well...Adidas isn't a good thing for beginners: your design is very very very weird (all over on the sleeves) and I can't recognize at all the logo on the sleeves...


Black: your black is way too black !!! we can't see the design at all...

Despite all those critics, I think you're making a good job...you just have to improve the sharps and strokes...but I thing there are still a lot of things to say to make those kits perfect...


Just waiting for more !!!Way to improve KM !!!! :)




PS: I've got a weird feeling, I think I make every rookie give up making with all these critics...: /
 

Interista13

Starting XI
Lpayer;2387887 said:
emm...first to comment...(as usual...)

PS: I've got a weird feeling, I think I make every rookie give up making with all these critics...: /

Awww...it's okay man, I was a rookie and I didn't give up:)

Wolff, it's a very nice start, from my little experience on these forums, take Lpayer's and everyone else's advice, they really help A LOT:)

Im my opinion you should just work on your logos, for example the Man Utd kit is missing certain ones...
 

JFG_Lancer

Senior Squad
These are not the worst kits I have ever seen but I have a few tips that can help you out. Now that I'm in semi-retirement I feel that I should pass on my knowledge.

1. Get an new texture.

The one that you use looks very blurry and makes the kit look plain. I find that a texture greatly helps bring a kits full potential out.

2. Add details

I understand that you have just started out recently but over time you need to incorprate more minor details. For example you need stiches and a collar. I know that when I started out I didn't add them and I got called on it numerous times. The best way to do so is by experimenting with the line tool in photoshop, if you have it. It takes time to master it but once you do your kits will look 100x's better.

3. Don't use total Black

What I do is make a colour that is a very dark grey.

4. You need better logos

Go to the "Best Brands of the World" website, I use this one. Just type their name under google and you should find it. Otherwise there are some links in the kitmakers resource thread, by the ways check out the helpful forums here.

5. Get O-Edit

This program can be found many places and will help see the kits on a model, p.s I don't think It works if you have Windows Vista, I't doesn't for me at least.

Remember that this advice is meant to help not to deter you, I know that when I first started out the help people posted helped me alot.

If you have any specific questions or just need help with something just pm me.
 

wolff

Senior Squad
Thanks for your really useful comments.I will make my kits like what you say;)
There are my some kits
Fenerbahçe Home Front 08 Update

Orduspor Away 08(Turkey)

Kayserispor Home 08(Turkey)

Galatasaray Home 08

Galatasaray Screenshot:
 

Lpayer

Reserve Team
the fener front is very...black and I think the design is a bit pixelous...

Ordu: are you sure the left Kappa is in the good sense ? And I think the Kappa logo (on front) is a bit too big: u should reduce the height...and you forgot to invert the ordu logo on the shorts (even if we can't see it clearly in-game)

kayseri: the adidas design is...rubbish and irregular...sometimes pixelous, sometimes too polygonal...the climacool should be at the bottom of the front, not on the shorts and you forgot to invert the adidas logo on right sock (3rd sq.)

galat: the design is pixelous...and the same last sentence as kayseri...I might be paranoid but I've already seen this design somewhere...


ut it's a good job, imo, try to make easier kits because adidas kits are very hard (that's why I just made one single kitpack)...
 

wolff

Senior Squad
Thanks for your comment.
And
Gaziantepspor Home 08(Turkey)

İstanbul Büyükşehir Belediyespor(Turkey)
 


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