Advice please

[dannyeli]

I would like to hear from you guys on how can i improved this. I know is not the greastest thing you've seen here, but i would like to make it look better. I would love especially to hear for the great sig makers that are here that know a lot of this stuff.

 

[$teauA]

Try the blend the "floating head" somehow into the backround, it looks wierd.

 

[Seb]

IMO it would be great without the head

 

[manutd4eva]

The head looks like God hovering over him or something.

Yea, so either try to blend it in or take it out.

 

[Viks]

very nice
as said before the head looks a bit silly also try and move the DJ RELEASE of the guys head if possibe

 

[PhiLLer]

Get rid of the head because it looks daft, if you want something there but the head but with the guy's body otherwise it's just hovering above like everyone said.

Those screws on each of the four corners, they really have to go.

Move the text away from the guy's head and use a different colour that complements the red, grey doesn't.

Those black lines in the background look a bit stupid and unecessary. They seem a bit too blurred. If you want something like that in the background I'd use straight lines (the tv screen effect) or bits of very small, unreadable text.

 

[dannyeli]

Thanks i will make the changes

 

[dannyeli]

Thank you all for the comments and especially the critics, i like them 'cause i can see my problems, i did this one, i'm still not convinced. I know that i'm still a rookie on this, but i guess practice makes perfect

On this one, i get ride of the big head, and but like another background, i did without a background but for me it looked so empty. Anywat comments are really appreciated.

 

[manutd4eva]

Much better, but I don't like the font on the vertical text.(:/)

 

[Stotty]

aye dennis, no wot you mean, it just looks........dunno