Kit attempt

[burleys]

Please could i have constuctive criticism of this my first kit attempt - my beloved Ipswich. thanks in advance.

 

[calkcy]

tbh m8, i cant critizize it, its bloody fantastic
good job

 

[FerryvD]

very good, you're talented

 

[Gobby]

Good start,

a few points...
- The sponsor is too wide, try aligning it to the badge and 'punch' by looking at photos.
- The font of TXU Energy is wrong.
- Get rid of the blue square around the circular part of the sponsor.
- the punch bit should be "·PUNCH·" and not ".PUNCH."
- The badge, Sponsor and Punch need to be squashed vertically slightly, otherwise they become stretched ingame.
- The white lines need to extend onto the sleeves, try looking at an EA kit to see where to make the lines match up.
-Add the 'mesh' bit under the arms (look at a photo for reference).
-And finally, don't take this post too harshly I'm just a bit bored and decided to give some really useful feedback to make this kit 100% perfect. I'm sure 95% of ppl would be happy with what you've already done.

Gobz

 

[burleys]

Thanks

Thanks all for the comments and yes the criticism is welcome im now working on a second version. Hopefully to be posted soon - its not as easy as it first appears !!

 

[bmxmongoose]

that is brilliant 4 your first attempt well done

 

[burleys]

Ok here goes, I have tried my best. I just want to give back a little to the Fifa community. I respect all the patch makers and face and kit makers because they make this game (which I love) 10 times better.
Go Super Blues !!!!

 

[bmxmongoose]

looks great well done

 

[burleys]

thanks again I may attempt away kit next.

 

[bmxmongoose]

you should try the away kit mate, your kit is great and im sure the away 1 will be if u make it

 

[DjurgårdensIF]

ingames?

 

[burleys]

Here goes the away kit. Ive tried my best hope they are some use to someone.
Royles men win again !!

 

[Punkt]

please could you make the millwall, derby and leicester kits too?
:P

 

[Punkt]

oh i forgot...and wolves too lol

 

[Gobby]

very nice 2nd edition and away kit

 

[iceboy]

very nice kits

 

[schwebbs75]

that away kit is sweet!

 

[burleys]

Thanks ever so much for the encouragement I will attempt a few other kits now