For a first kit it is really nice, you've got the blending layers working well, i mean the texture shows nicely on all colours and your logos are cut well with smooth edges. You've just got to add a few more details onto the kit.
- First try making the logos on the front of the shirt bigger and move the nike logo to a more appropriate postion.
- The white shapes on the sleeves should be a different shape to make it more accurate to the real thing. Use this website to find more pictures
http://editorial.gettyimages.com/source/search/Product.aspx?p=2&e=0&pg=1&am=-1 also those shapes should be on the long sleeves but slightly different.
- You can see that their is another Nike logo on the left sleeves try adding that just as an extra little detail, but don't forget that everything you add to the left sleeves, shorts and socks should be flipped over so it looks like it is in a mirror. For good logos go to this website www.brandsoftheworld.com don't forget to download it and then open it in photoshop that way you can make it as big or small as possible.
- Add a nike logo to the left side of the shorts.
- If you look at the socks you'll see that there are black lines down both sides of a nike logo which could also be added.
- Aswell as those details you could add stuff such as mesh and lines, but I think it would be best if you just made a few more kits first before you try doing more complex stuff such as that.
From your first kit I can really see you have potential to be a really good kit maker if you continue with it. If you don't understand anything I said or don't know how to do something, then just add me on MSN Messenger, my address is
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